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......................do3esnt even look like riri's style!!!
TAT used cheat most of it....(lining tools)
the colours arent well worked with the dark scenery the skin is bright cant changed it...........lousy glow for the papers...
epic phailed................:iconotlplz:
:iconcommentplz: seriously i wan to hear more critiques...

updated...forgot that blasted bookmark lol

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Ixia is one of the 3 gate keeper protecting the main system.However this fellow is actually the doppelganger of the original Ixia. A doppelganger is the more of the dark side of one self.Some are able to separate themselves from their original and gain an immortal existence.However if their original was harmed by anyone other than themselves,they will receive a 10 time more damage.If a doppelganger manage to kill the original, they will take over the original existence,while if the original defeat the doppelganger, he/she will gain an enormous power.This Ixia was suppose to have be defeated but the original Ixia decided to make a deal with him which i will not say now lol.The doppel Ixia sealed the original and put him somehwere where not even the main system could find so he can do what he want.Being the doppelganger of the gate keeper,he have the power to become anyone that are still alive r still have their doppelganger part.The pages of the book each have a full story of a character (he like reading stories) but mostly help him in his bet against the original.

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and thats why the reason for teh lame title......

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:iconpipiyo-s:
wow nice :heart:

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Don't click
When the star is too near to you, you can't see the shine...
:iconquadtrofang:
Nice story concept about the doppleganger. No need to comment on the artwork. Looks already great as it is...

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but it loves me....
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:iconnekorina5321:
GOD i love your coloring ;A;

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"I love you" such words don't satisfy my emotions.
"I will eternally love you..."
:iconpatsumilk:
WHOA O__O
this is great !
i love his hair, and also the folding effect you did *_*
:iconkatyenka-svetlana:
I don't know what you're being so pessimistic about~ The only thing that I would change is the shading on the shirt (it looks a little...odd?) and add more shading to the face~
Still, it looks amazing~ And I love the shading on the hair and jacket, absolutely gorgeous <333
Riri? As in =ririlemone? Cause it does kinda look like her style, if that's what you were trying~ Though not the coloring, since she combines colors alot XD
But I still really like the way you colored it :3
I'm sorry, I'm not very good at critiquing x'D

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Osu.
:iconinnocentxguilt:
He's so handsome! I love his hair especially and his jacket looks so cool. >u<
Love your shading. <33333

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:icontsugumi09x:
u expert in shading folds and hair
uwaaaaaaaa ~~ stop attacking with coolness >.<
:glomp:

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:iconboggeydan:
Nothing much wrong here, except for the way he's holding the book - the spine should be on his palm.

Other than that, great work here yet again! :thumbsup::D

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